I'm trying to go back to chapter one and figure out, well first time I've got to get this one I had a little note but this is not first the external audio entry since I discovered I had hpm and that I need to get an inturnal defibrillator within me. So it's been a rough two days now and you might see some residual kind of influences there from that but in the case I'm trying to go on with this story. So back to chapter one. I don't like how Adam simply informs the reader that he was chilling hold in Iraq for no reason. I want that to be a reason. I want the reason to be consistent with what would probably happen. Even if not true, it could have probably happened between the group of inner prising and yet rogue soldiers. I don't think there is a chance to see a little personal wealth out of there. I don't want to see any real action at army not Marines. Ironically they're trying to help the residents out of O'Hallis. I'm truly a water well for them. Adam is a well contractor. He only knows what he learned from his father on a few weekends here and there. He's by no means an expert nor is he a geologist who specializes in surveying land for possible deposits of oil, water or natural gas. He's winging it but he and Google give it in their heads and maybe even Sergeant or perhaps Sergeant Logan and John Thryer Google give it in their heads. I want to do something more. You know, chilling needs safety wells. There's no action in it. They want to get rich on the action. That's when they decide to. And look at the service area. Adam now. I'm going to take a look at the service area. I'm going to take a look at the service area. A geologist, a historian of the earth overnight. Sergeant Logan just represents the desire that has been born out of frustration for so long. And leading men to a false war. And Adam represents. And maybe in the sense of youth that's willing to do it. That is blind to rich. And that perhaps just sees it as a way of having fun. And doesn't really know the full impact of what they're doing. So anyway, that's why they need to go out at night. And as a sergeant, he's able to use his connections to get them out at night. And Google is also able to hack into 10th column. And maybe it looks like you know. And nothing's going on. And everything is as it should be. So. I'm going to be tossing.

Okay, so there might be a little more justification for these night runs, but in any case, we go on to you. They're so digging only to find it, you know. They can't get very far, but they know they need to fill up their water truck from the lake as well. So here's a little logistical trickiness to their operation, but they get it done. And maybe it's on their first night out, and that's what's so crazy about the whole event. So Adam is reading off the coordinates over a... so there's Packer too. And now the described Packer has the... you know, he's, he lies somewhere in between... Sergeant Durham represents the desire and the leadership of Packer just represents pure and adulterated brute force, willing to take it no matter what risk. So that's why he's willing, that's why they need him as the driver, or perhaps maybe he was there. There's Sentry, he was always, you know, on the lookout for danger, and it makes sense because he's the first to go. He's the first to have had his eyesight taken. He's in the middle of the night. And so... What happened up to that? Well... Sergeant tells Adam that he's just going to have to keep driving. He's just going to have to do it. We're just going to have to go into this blind. That's an awesome quote. The Chaiwa du Wix. And so they pull up to the location. And, you know, for some reason, they didn't see this when they were pulling up. And Adam is the first to discover it. But they... Adam stumbles upon, stumbled upon. They have to use those words. I stumbled upon a man who was standing, standing on something. He was taller than me. And whatever he was standing on came up so about my knees. The reason I know is because I almost tripped over it. But... And I discovered that... And I was standing on the... The stump. I discovered feet that were sitting right at around knee level. And then we... So it's very important that the man is standing on this stump. And then you can proceed with the same situation as before. And when he gets down off of it, it seems like it's really short. So... But... And it might be a cedar tree stump. We're not really sure it's very important to find the right kind of tree stump here. So... Anyway... And maybe that prevents us from having... That keeps me from having to sit there and make Google some language expert who can figure out that he's using ancient cemarian. So... And maybe the man instead of... Maybe he comes down to try and talk to them, shows them the cup pans. And it gets back on his tree stump. But... And points to the sky. So... That's important to this man. But we're representing... You know, some sort of spirit that is telling them don't... Don't be here. This is a sacred place. You know, in the nutshell that's what he's saying. He's also referring to... He's referring to... Basically saying don't destroy it. That would take her granted. And... Have Berk near for the other.